The End

Not intently derivative to my afore said plan of action,
marine me, king me, and rewrite my history's captions
until blind men look upon the ancient dead
and leaders of the world gather wood for fire.
Time builds concaves as men build domes.
Ergo, concrete spires recess under pressure,
centripetal forces being notably reversed
irregardless of typicality and reputation.
A pause is felt globally as time double-backs
and the process becomes undone.

The Beginning
Last edited by BluePaintCult at Sep 11, 2007,
I absolutely love this. Excellent work.

"Success is as dangerous as failure. Hope is as hollow as fear." - from Tao Te Ching

You cannot quit me so quickly
There's no hope in you for me
No corner you could squeeze me
But I got all the time for you, love

The Space Between
The tears we cry
Is the laughter keeps us coming back for more
The Space Between
The wicked lies we tell
And hope to keep safe from the pain

But will I hold you again?
These fickle, fuddled words confuse me
Like 'Will it rain today?'
Waste the hours with talking, talking
These twisted games we're playing

We're strange allies
With warring hearts
What wild-eyed beast you be
The Space Between
The wicked lies we tell
And hope to keep safe from the pain

Will I hold you again?
Will I hold...

Look at us spinning out in
The madness of a roller coaster
You know you went off like a devil
In a church in the middle of a crowded room
All we can do, my love
Is hope we don't take this ship down

The Space Between
Where you're smiling high
Is where you'll find me if I get to go
The Space Between
The bullets in our firefight
Is where I'll be hiding, waiting for you
The rain that falls
Splash in your heart
Ran like sadness down the window into...
The Space Between
Our wicked lies
Is where we hope to keep safe from pain

Take my hand
'Cause we're walking out of here
Oh, right out of here
Love is all we need here

The Space Between
What's wrong and right
Is where you'll find me hiding, waiting for you
The Space Between
Your heart and mine
Is the space we'll fill with time
The Space Between...

(i'll do this one later. got work.)
Haha.. Funny. I made my title after I wrote the piece and then remembered where I had heard it before... and hoped no one would notice... but alas.

You never "did this one later"

Anyone else offer suggestions or just tell me what you think?