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I personally didn't write this, one of my best friends did and i'd like to get people's opinions.
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Revelation

This is the time, of my second coming
A prophecy foretold, a story unfolding
My father’s creation, being reincarnated
My signs have been sent, for seen and faded

You preach everyday in the houses of the holy
Yet your terrified by the unforgiving reality

Trust my instincts
For I am the one you praise
An overture waiting
As you all become amazed

Into my hands
I commend your spirits
Into my hands
Your forsaken by me
This isn’t a war
No screaming or running
It’s the revelation
Mankind’s fall

The eyes tell a story, Mine are my of a guiding
And I swear to you, The pain will be subdued
Failure’s not an option, its more of a disappointment
Forgiving and forgetting, regretting your decision

We all make a choice, now reality comes to play
History is being made, but the ending remains the same

The dawn of a new era
A peaceful new beginning
And now you look at me
Its not torture, its our destiny

Into my hands
I commend your spirits
Into my hands
Your forsaken by me
This isn’t a war
No screaming or running
It’s the revelation
Mankind’s fall

Solo

Into my hands
I commend your spirits
Into my hands
Your forsaken by me
This isn’t a war
No screaming or running
It’s the revelation
Mankind’s fall