#2
Wow. This is really good man. The guitar tone is nice, the only thing it needs is a flanger. All riffs played pretty well except for the one that almost always follows when ozzy says "Bark at the Moon". It was a bit sloppy. The solo was pretty nice, the final runs could use a little work, but not bad. Pretty good cover, just work on a couple things and it could be real good.

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#3
damn that guitar tone is so fat. so much mids and like no bass. pretty cool in a way, but not the best for the song but u can imitate Jake E Lee. that's pretty insane right there. i never really got into this song, but as far as rhythm, notes, stuff like that, it's sounding great. u got some fast fingers. great cover. i was rocking with ur guitar rhythm.

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#5
Hi!
I crit yours, you crit mine?

I don't know the song because I'm not really an Ozzy fan, but I can recognize good playing, and this was certainly a good cover! You have a very nice tone, and your soloing is great, except you bend your notes a little too high up.. But that didn't bother too much, your playing was great and your squeals really were amazing..

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#6
Quote by ZeGuitarist
Hi!
I crit yours, you crit mine?

I don't know the song because I'm not really an Ozzy fan, but I can recognize good playing, and this was certainly a good cover! You have a very nice tone, and your soloing is great, except you bend your notes a little too high up.. But that didn't bother too much, your playing was great and your squeals really were amazing..

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Thanks a lot for that man, i did criticize your MIDNIGHT cover, it was pretty good, if you record something else let me know!!
#7
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damn that guitar tone is so fat. so much mids and like no bass. pretty cool in a way, but not the best for the song but u can imitate Jake E Lee. that's pretty insane right there. i never really got into this song, but as far as rhythm, notes, stuff like that, it's sounding great. u got some fast fingers. great cover. i was rocking with ur guitar rhythm.

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Thanks man, i dont like too much the tone of Jake E Lee in the recording but his live tone is awesome IMO, thats why i used a different one for both rhythm and lead, besides i dont have a flanger

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#8
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Thanks man, i dont like too much the tone of Jake E Lee in the recording but his live tone is awesome IMO, thats why i used a different one for both rhythm and lead, besides i dont have a flanger

haha thanks for listening


I wouldn't too much about the flanger. I think you did a great job. I play that song and it is HARD to play through and get it good.
#10
Hmm the rythm tone was realy awesome and playing was great but i realy didnt like the "vocal" part, i dont know if you did it on purpose but all the bends were out of tune so i dont realy like that .
The solo was pretty ok , slightly sloppy at times though.
Otherwise great cover .
But you should work on your bends and vibrato.

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#12
I don't know why some were complaining about the tone, sounded great to me. I think the "vocal guitar" made it easier to follow the song IMO...but yes, as EvilMagician mentioned some of the bends need improving. As for the solos:

The first one had a slightly sloppy part in the beginning and I thought the end of it was gonna be too...but was wrong and it sounded awesome...and nice echo at the end of the 1st solo btw.

The second solo, for some reason I could tell more easily yeh used a different pickup on it but, was a wicked solo.

That song is pretty demanding and it sounds like yeh got the chops for it man. Awesome job.

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#15
One of my favourite songs, and you did a great job on it, although as said, the vocal line's bends were a bit off, but nothing major, I liked the second solo especially.

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