#1
C4C. Just a song I wrote

Absolute Zero


A place outside of time
Where no bells chime
The motion of earth stops moving
And all things start freezing

Impulse tells me it’s possible
To reach this location
A magical land, where all time freezes
Absolute Zero, so cold, so loved

You asked “how”
I reply “Easy”
The scientist states “hard”
I ask “Why?”

The scientist takes out a graph
One answer
2 problems
No solution

Movement is everywhere
Impossible to see
Impossible to reach
Oh I want to be there
Where nothing is moving
Heat is not transferred
But the heat is on
The heat is on us

Impulse tells me it’s possible (those fake lives)
To reach this location (Yea those you make in your sleep)
A magical land, where all time freezes (will never,)
Absolute zero, so cold, so loved (ever)
(Come true)

Those fake lives
Yeah, those you make in your sleep
Will never, ever
Come true
#3
first of all - liked the song.. nice ideas. I'm not sure i got the point of the song.. but it's cool, and i liked it.

You asked “how”
I reply “Easy”
The scientist states “hard”
I ask “Why?”
I really liked these lines. Their Beauty is that they are so true.. most people, when they don't know how to do something ask how.. and those who know answer easily.. while the scientist always say it's hard.. it's hard. goo lines

The scientist takes out a graph
One answer
2 problems
No solution
i think these lines, are kinda stuck and don't fit with the general rhythm, feeling, and flow of the song. when i read them.. i was like:"How did those lines get there..". but if they have a meaning i missed.. then please tell me.

Those fake lives
Yeah, those you make in your sleep
Will never, ever
Come true
again.. great lines. really really loved them. they touch me personally. really good

great song. keep it up!

if you could also look at mine it would be great: Forever Gone

eytanc