#1
Tell me the natural rhythm of these words in whatever time signature it works best for, thanks.

Flying away in summer rain.
Sleeping tonight up in the sky.
Off to somewhere else again.
Sometimes wondering why.

I think, as I wait for sleep to come,
it seems to me, we all are on,
an ancient flight to the morning sun.
I study the scenes, and write my songs.

Thanks in advance.
New To Town With A Made Up Name

In The Angel's City

Chasing Fortune And Fame
09/03/2012
#2
...that's all up to you home diggity.
just read it smoothly, if its your work its your rhythm not anyone elses
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#3
It's primarily Iambic octameter, which I suppose if you were to transpose that to a time signature it would be 4/4.
When you were born, you cried, and the world rejoiced. Live your life in such a manner that when you die, the world cries and you rejoice.
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