#2
it was cool man. u had a really african american-ish accent lol. just throw that out there. ur guitar was a bit off rhythm, but was kinda hard to tell because no drums or anything. it seemed like u were having difficulty singing. why don't u try next time with a drum track? and multi tracking to record guitar and vocals at different times?


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#3
The guitar sounds pretty good, but there were some rhythm problems. That can be solved with click track or some drums though. I think the vocals are a little loud, but that's just mixing. The solo at like 2:30ish sounds good, but I think you might have overdone it with the bends. If you just added some drums and some mixing, it would sound great.


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