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I'm new here.. and this is a song i wrote a couple month's back... and i really wanted to get an opinion about it.. so if you could tell me what you though that would be great.. thanks!

Forever Gone

Verse 1
Across the road you went
You never look back
To see her crying face
Weeping on another man
You went to the bar to have a drink
You didn’t think of anything
Ignoring those memories
That kept on coming to your head
Of what you should’ve done
When it had begun
You realize too late
You realize

Chorus
It doesn’t matter what you take
It will be lost
No matter what you do
It won’t return
From here and on
Forever gone
That’s what you’ll be
For all of time
The memories will haunt you still
Never saying good-bye
Good-bye
You are lost
Forever gone

Verse 2
You went to her home
With flowers in your hand
You asked her out to the prom
You felt you were a man
You didn’t think that cup
You didn’t think that sip
Could turn it all wrong
Your life one big miss
The memory is there
But now you don’t care
You realize too late
You realize

Chorus
It doesn’t matter what you take
It will be lost
No matter what you do
It won’t return
From here and on
Forever gone
That’s what you’ll be
For all of time
The memories will haunt you still
Never saying good-bye
Good-bye
You are lost
Forever gone

Verse 3
You threw on her a chair
She screamed and pulled at your hair
Your love for her never ceased
But for her it never exist
Those things you took
They got to your head
She warned you not to
That you’d become another man
And now you’re on the top
Looking down on the street
You realize too late
You realize

Chorus
It doesn’t matter what you take
It will be lost
No matter what you do
It won’t return
From here and on
Forever gone
That’s what you’ll be
For all of time
The memories will haunt you still
Never saying good-bye
Good-bye
You are lost
Forever gone

eytanc