#1
recordings on my profile

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/damn-right%21/music/all/play72969
Interesting fact, the lead guitar at the start and end is played using an empty red wine bottle as a slide. I thought it'd be fitting.

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Here It Is Again

You told me im too predictable,
and i said "you're to blame"
and im worried the bottle of red that im killing
might cause my insides to stain.
and the hunger im feeling is causing this reeling
as i sing to myself in the rain
and i'd lie to myself but i know in the morning
i'm just gonna do it again

so here it is again,
the common link between a segregated people
and oh isnt it a shame,
that we're matched through the joyful expression of pain
here we go again

they tell me i might have a problem
i say "no problem here move along"
they can hazard a guess, try their best
but i know that theyre probably wrong
we've all got our strengths and weaknesses
our personal achilles heel
and you're so keen to tell me
and i'm sure that its killing me
but no more than the pain that i feel
“I smoke. If this bothers anyone, I suggest you look around at the world in which we live and shut your f*ckin' mouth.” RIP
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#2
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recordings on my profile

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/damn-right%21/music/all/play72969
Interesting fact, the lead guitar at the start and end is played using an empty red wine bottle as a slide. I thought it'd be fitting.

will return crit.


Here It Is Again

You told me im too predictable,
and i said "you're to blame"
and im worried the bottle of red that im killing
might cause my insides to stain.
and the hunger im feeling is causing this reeling
as i sing to myself in the rain
and i'd lie to myself but i know in the morning
i'm just gonna do it again
whoa...really catchy lyrics and song. the voice is reminding me a little of Tegan and Sara which is making me like it even more. I love the last three lines...and the 'might cause my insides to stain.'
so here it is again,
the common link between a segregated people
and oh isnt it a shame,
that we're matched through the joyful expression of pain
here we go again
this is pretty interesting as well. nothing to complain about. the 'joyful expression of pain' is a nice touch.
they tell me i might have a problem
i say "no problem here move along"
pretty witty, i like it.
they can hazard a guess, try their best
but i know that theyre probably wrong
we've all got our strengths and weaknesses
our personal achilles heel
and you're so keen to tell me
and i'm sure that its killing me
but no more than the pain that i feel
writing is strong here as well. I like how it all flows...this ties it up nicely. especially like the last line.


overall i really liked it...its definitely a nice change. i like your style a lot. you already commented my song in R&R so its all good. I love the vocals....really sweet recording. feel free to add me if you guys have a myspace music page.
#3
consider yourself added! Thankyou for your comments, anythin you want looked at just send me a message
“I smoke. If this bothers anyone, I suggest you look around at the world in which we live and shut your f*ckin' mouth.” RIP
Http://www.Smash-it-up.tk
#4
I really like it dude.....it's awesome...it's catchy, it flows well and your rhyming scheme works ....well done mate...good work 8/10 probs 9/10.........could you crit mine please it's called The Enemy Of Your Enemy Is Your Friend....cheers ....https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=674608
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