#1
Well, I have been gone for awhile. My last song was probably like a month or two ago, if not longer. So in my spare time I've had the past few days in between schoolwork, I've been working on this metalcore/melodeath peice. Sooo....yeah. Let me know what you think.

Crit for Crit. Just leave a link.
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Metalcore-Melodeath.zip
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#3
that was pretty nice, i liked the use of piano and the solo was pretty decent. im not really the crit guy so sorry if this is crap, thanks for mine. the intro didnt grab my attention and thats about it, nice work.
#4
81 views and only 2 replies? It can't be THAT bad. =\
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Well this calls for a beer, Uncle-Dad Cletus!

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HAAAAA! Jokes on you! I high fived you with the hand i fapped with!
#5
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81 views and only 2 replies? It can't be THAT bad. =\


Oh trust me, it's not! I really liked it. Does get a little boring at the end though. I think the Interlude and most of the solo is brilliant, and like the main riff too Not sure what else I can say about it Good work, keep it up
Simon


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You look just like your father...

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#6
that was really good my friend

i loved the prechorus (N), and the outro, in my opinion, it got better and better the whole way through

the only crit i could say is i think it started a little slow. if you put a little more power into the beginning it woul be an amazing song.

keep it up