I recently recorded this piece. The guitar part isnt hard at all, but its the overal composition that I want yer opinion on. I played guitar and bass myself, and did the drums and orchestrea sounds with a midi keyboard through logic pro 7.3. Tell me what ya think! Dont come telling me that the guitar isnt surprising cos it isnt.


its the second song (dot rock II)

Some of my gear:
Epi Les Paul Custom
Fender American Special Tele
Gibson ES-339
London City Strat copy
Other Strat copy
Taylor Big Baby (acoustic)
Ibanez SGT 130 (acoustic)

Trace 2x 12" guitar amp
Dime Distortion
I'm leaving for school in a minute, so I'll give a full crit later. So far it makes me want to dance dance dance
I quite liked it, sounds like it should be played on a soundtrack for an action film haha
I know you said the guitar is a little obvious and it is-but it suits the rest of the song. My only problem with it is it gets a little repetitive, but i do like it.

return crit?

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Hey the soong was pretty cool. A good dance beat mixed with distorted guitars and strings, nice idea It was mixed very nicely as well good work. Maybe a bit of a sudden ending, tho i dunno how else u cud end it honestly but it worked well so good work keep it up

If you have the time return crit wud be much appreciated cheers