#1
hey I'd like some advice with this one, ive had mixed reactions, some like it and some hate it. Fun fact-the guitar at the start and in the end chorus is played using a red wine bottle laid on the strings.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/damn-right%21/

will return crit.
“I smoke. If this bothers anyone, I suggest you look around at the world in which we live and shut your f*ckin' mouth.” RIP
Http://www.Smash-it-up.tk
#2
well here I am to return your crit

I like yer voice, the production could use some work

the hook 'here we go again' sounds really good and catchy to me, keeps hanging in my head but not in a bad way. There are some parts in the lyrics where it looks like youre trying to put too many words in one sentence though.

Overall rating would be 7 or 7.5

keep up the good work
Max
Some of my gear:
Epi Les Paul Custom
Fender American Special Tele
Gibson ES-339
London City Strat copy
Other Strat copy
Taylor Big Baby (acoustic)
Ibanez SGT 130 (acoustic)

Trace 2x 12" guitar amp
Dime Distortion
#3
haha yeah thats a common problem of mine- got too much to say hahaha
“I smoke. If this bothers anyone, I suggest you look around at the world in which we live and shut your f*ckin' mouth.” RIP
Http://www.Smash-it-up.tk