#1
Just came to me, id like to know what you guys think of it. Would fit in as death metal or maybe thrash?

End the season,
Plan their fate.
Slay every reason,
Return all hate.

Eternal Winter.

Bodies blacken out the sky,
Fall upon my prey.
Nothing left to die,
Sun casting its last ray.

Eternal Winter.

Showing no remorse,
An endless dream.
A continuing force,
Provoking a scream.

Eternal.

Winter.

Its rough and my first lyrical post on UG.

I added a verse
Last edited by thegrungyhippie at Sep 13, 2007,
#2
good god finish it, its pretty good
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