I've got a rough draft of a song. Nice relaxing beginning with an explosion of an ending. <---lame) Just looking for some critique on the structure, tone, tension, and the final solo. Please be harsh as necessary.
solo guitar sounds way out of tune with the rhythm
its not too bad out of tune. i liked it, really liked the soloing. nice chord progression. with some drums it would be awesome. and vocals. the solo towards the end was pretty cool, nice tone. keep it up, got some good stuff to work with here. crit mine,