Here's a collab I just finished up with my friend John here locally in Florida. He played all the 12 string guitars, sang the main (high) vocal and played the strings section on his keyboard. I did the dirty guitars, sang the low harmony, made the backing track and did the mix. Check it out and I'll do the same.
This is a very well produced cover. The 12 string sounds awesome in the beginning. Vocal harmonies are done pretty well, there are a few rough spots, but for the most part they are good. The only thing I could crit maybe is the level of the electric guitar, it sounds a bit low in comparison to the bass and the vocals. Solo sounds godo though.

Also, good job on the synth, it really adds to the cover.

Overall this is a great cover, keep up the good work man!