#1
This is a new song i wrote over the past couple days. It needs a lot of work i rushed this video and it could be a lot better. But please give me your comments and thoughts.

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#2
didnt "wow" me, but thats because its just a guitar. with better quality, and a band, i think it would be pretty sweet
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#3
Well, I can barely hear what you're playing, you need to brush up your playing and record it with a band, but the riffs are potentially pretty sweet.

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Last edited by poona at Sep 16, 2007,
#4
Alright thanks for the advice. Poona i just got done critting yours.
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#5
Nice riffs.
What's your guitar tuned to? The strings sounded a little loose and weird. I know that if I drop my Strat too far the strings will sound like crap. lol
Keep workin on it and it'll be a good song. =)

Thanks for your critique.
#7
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Nice riffs.
What's your guitar tuned to? The strings sounded a little loose and weird. I know that if I drop my Strat too far the strings will sound like crap. lol
Keep workin on it and it'll be a good song. =)

Thanks for your critique.


Actually its in standard. But i later found out my guitar was wayyy out of tune, so its probably closer to Eb or D.
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#8
From what I heard, it sounded not too bad at all! The recording, etc. needs alot of work, that could make things a ton different and better!

For some reason, parts of the riffs reminded me of DOOM.


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#9
DOOM as in the jfac demo?
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Necrophagist how could all you n00bs forget the best german metalcore band ever. i think theyre tech metalcore tho or sumfin