Im not the piano man,
im never asked to sing.
and no one really gives a damn
of what i feel or what i think.

and all the songs ive sung for you
are lost on these four walls.
But if you were to hear them,
im sure youde be enthrawled
i quite like the first verse. it's very good...even if a bit unoriginal.
the second verse was good too up until the last line....it justkilled it in a fell swoop for me.....i'm trying to think of an alternative line but the brain isn't working today.

not much of a crit...sorry.