#2
man, are you seriously 13 years old?!?!

nice playing! but me to shame anyway
#3
Hi! Crit4crit?
Ok youre no Steve Vai but i really liked your cover, its not bad at all! Your guitar was a little out of tune (a little too low), but hey your accurate playing and great tone made up for that and of course your ****ING AWESOME guitar

Here's my Satch cover, check it out and crit plz https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=669260
Thanx and cheers!
#6
Very nice cover, and good song choice too.
The thing I think you need to work on more is your vibrato and some bends.
#7
I thought that sounded great, especially for someone your age. I just think you should work on vibrato, remember that Steve uses a circular motion in his vibrato.
Hey, It would be awesome if you can check out my Cissy Strut cover, heres the link: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=676354&highlight=sissy+strut
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#11
not too bad man, it was kinda 'robotic' for my tastes.

slow down your vibrato, try and make it more distinct. put some sould into it

also, awesome guitar man
#12
Also I forgot to add that your guitar is out of tune. I know you said it was perfectly in tune on other videos, and it might look like that to you, but I think the problem might be that your tuner is not set to the right calibration. Make sure it is 440. It sound like your at like 435. Your a bit flat.
#13
Some things: your guitar is out of tune, work on vibrato/slides, and smoother transitions.

You have the ability though, considering your age, you'll be a great player.
#14
Stunning. You should be rightly proud of that. When I was 13 I was still two years from even having touched a guitar(Yes that is bitterness). Seriously though, for what is quite a challengin song, you did great, it sounded proper, and to keep it up for 5 minutes is quite an achievement.
So many possibilities, so little ability.

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