It's a little iffy for the verses in terms of rhythm, and not a great recording period, but I think the choruses are pretty strong, and like it over all.

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Quote by crazypeanutman

damn yertle, you got some groove
wow this is great its really reminiscent of the beatles. really catchy the only part that i didnt like too much was when both vocals start to go together with different melodies only because it sounds jumbled up i think one of them needs to be turned down in the mix. other than that great title, really catchy and if anything the recording quality helps the song give a certain feel. good job.

http://ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=672367 c4c please
i like the vocals alot.

This is really good and catchy...the recording quality could be better but thats about all i can see.

good job