#1
Here's a song i've been working on for a day or so, i like the riffs, not exactly sure what i'd say the genre was, and i'm not really sure where to go from where i left off, but some crit would be nice

-update-
A little help on where to go next would be greatly appreiciated O_o
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Last edited by p!r4Te at Sep 17, 2007,
#2
I like it so far
Simon


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#3
i would like to thank ultimate guitar forums for their loving support and encouragement. o_o"
#4
I really like this. It has a very melodeath-ish sound. The riffs were good, though a little variation wouldn't hurt at this point. Measures 19 - 23 are great. The only issue with this I have so far is measure 26. The C# (4th fret on the A string) sounds bad. Other than that, good peice. 8/10

Crit mine if you have the chance (it's Powertab as well :-D ) https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=671025
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#5
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I really like this. It has a very melodeath-ish sound. The riffs were good, though a little variation wouldn't hurt at this point. Measures 19 - 23 are great. The only issue with this I have so far is measure 26. The C# (4th fret on the A string) sounds bad. Other than that, good peice. 8/10

Crit mine if you have the chance (it's Powertab as well :-D ) https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=671025

There is nothing wrong with bar 26, that C# gives it a dark sound.
#6
Well, it's all a matter of opinion. You may think it gives it a dark sound, but I think it sounds bad.
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#7
i love you too...lol

i couldn't really find a powercord that matched there, this one sounded best O_o.
if you figure something out, lemme know
#8
Not much to be said except that

I reeaally like it
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#9
it's really good but it sounds like a lot of songs i've heard before, where did you get the idea from? just sounds familiar. good though
#10
honestly, when i look back at it, the begining sounds like december flower by In Flames, and the rest sounds a bit like The Poison by Bullet For My Valentine >.> now i don't feel as good about it