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Okay, I'm sure you get alot of these in here, this is my first song I've posted.

I'm a bassist first and foremost, but I really wanna get into songwriting, so I figured here would be a good place to start with getting help.

Please tell me what you think.

Thanks


Verse One:

I sit here and look at you,
Stare right into your eyes,
What I'm feeling now isn't new,
And I start to feel it rise.


Chorus:

I don't know what to do,
No matter how hard I try,
The temptation is mounting,
And all I want is you.

I don't know what I'm feeling,
This is getting far too much,
"You can look all you like,
But please. Don't. Touch."


Verse Two:

I try hard to surpress it,
But to no avail,
I can't stop it now,
It's come of the rails,
I don't know what to do,
I want you far too much,
"You can look all you like,
But please. Don't. Touch."

Chorus.


Bridge:

I can't wait any longer,
I'm just about to crack,
It's always getting stronger.
And I can't hold it back.


Verse Three:

I shouldn't be doing this,
I know that it is wrong,
But this chance I'm not gonna miss,
I've waited far too long.


Chorus.
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