#1
Here are the lyrics and I posted a link to a recording (a very, very rough recording) of the song. Any and every, good or bad, comment is great thanks.

st= strummed riff
nm= normal riff

http://www.myspace.com/tenacioushank

UPDATED VERSION POSTED BELOW

Palm muted intro

(V1)nm
I wanna live my life till the day Im gone
I wanna break these chains Im going strong
I wanna
stay another day with you
I wanna
drop this top the sun shines through

(chorus)st
There are so many things I wanna do
Before I have to bid this life adieu
Im gunna make sure that I did a few
Im gunna spend every single one with you

(V2)st
I wanna Mustang 1969
I wanna get this song just right this time
I wanna someday surf coast-of peru
I wanna do whatever you want to

st
I wanna dig into a real good book
I wanna finish what I undertook
I wanna sing every single day to you
I wanna wake up to an ocean view

Chorus

Acoustic interlude

(V3)nm
Im gunna have my name all up in lights
Im gunna fill the hall with fans tonight
Im gunna hear them all sing along
You’re gunna know just why I wrote this song

Chorus (more intense)

Replay intro
Last edited by Tenacioush at Sep 18, 2007,
#3
i LOVE the story behind the song, about living life fully. that's an awesome topic. but as twist of fate said, it's a little repetitive. maybe add a few words/lines to throw off the repeated sounds? i LOVE it other than that though! GREAT work!
cHEER uP, eMO kiD!
#4
THanks I was kinda thinking the same about the repeating lines so I had this back up version. let me know what you think!

The only difference is that the chorus is extended with a kind of bridge and a different riff. Here are the lyrics and the song is on the myspace link I posted in the first post.

9chorus)st
There are so many things I wanna do
Before I have to bid this life adieu
Im gunna make sure that I did a few
Im gunna spend every single one with you
And theres no room in this life for regrets
That’s one thing that I know is dead set
So hop in shotgun lets go for a ride
Make the best of life like tomorrows our time!