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I wrote this song for a friend. She's recently gone through a lot with a boy who didn't treat her right at all. Please, please, please crit and help me make this the best it can be. I want to eventually sing it for her.
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I haven’t heard your voice,
In a while now.
And missing you,
Is out of style now.
Oh, there was a time,
When you were all I wanted.
But now it’s time,
Oh, I’m done with being haunted.

Chorus:
And my heart can only beat so long for you.
You don’t know the kinda hurt I’m going through.
(No, no)
The time doesn’t pass all that fast,
When you’re waiting for the one who loved you last,
To realize, yeah to open their eyes,
To what they had.


So now, I spend these days, just thinkin’.
Cryin’ inside, but I’m still thinkin’.
How could you have been so blind,
To leave all of what we had behind?
I just don’t know, no, I just don’t know.

Chorus

Do you still miss me?
(still miss me?)
Oh, do you miss me?
(miss me?)
Do you still love me…

And my heart can only beat so long for you.
You don’t know the kinda hurt I’m going through.
The time doesn’t pass all that fast,
When you wanna be in love with the one you loved last,
Please realize, open up your eyes,
To what you have…
cHEER uP, eMO kiD!