#1
Hey guys, I had a go at the second track off my concept album today, but the recording did not go well at all.

To me, the guitars sound very flat and boring, and I couldn't fix them in the mix, either.

Still, it's worth getting some feedback.

Leave me a few comments, and link me back.

You will recieve a detailed and fruitful piece of advice back. What could possibly go wrong?

Cheers.

Mr President: www.myspace.com/hiroshimasoundtrackforanewage
#2
Sorry, my edit window is freezing up.

PS.) the song is supposed to have a huge, arena, orchestral wall of sound feel, which is sort of there, in a very blighted and diminished way.
#3
Me likey. Can't really hear the huge, arena, orchestral wall of sound feel though I can just hear a good Johnny Thunders-ish song. Which is always good.
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#4
the drums are very good. i like the intro talking. i like guitars. they weren't very strong, but they were really good. i like theme alot. i really thought the vibe was really good. guitars need more highs. soloing had some awkward frases, but were pretty good. vocals were pretty decent. they really fit the music style

crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=674044
Too cool for a signature.