#1
No more than twice
If at all
Thats all we get
and then we die

one afternoon
lets share life
when night falls
you're gone forever

and thats all
thats all you have
so lets shake hands
at the funeral

come back


any comments would be very much appreciated, and returned.
.... before turning the gun on himself
#2
i like it. i would be interested ot know what you were thinking about when you wrote it, and then ill give you some more feedback.
#3
thanks a lot. glad you like it. when i wrote it which was about 5 minutes ago i wasn't really thinking specifically about anything. but a close friend of mine passed away last week so i was feeling depressed and thinking about that, and how brief life is and how we have to seize it, hang on to it and make the most of it
.... before turning the gun on himself