#1
How can I stop this Pain ?
As I stand here in The Summer Rain,

Dreams haunt me of The Ghost of Your Face,
Your peircing stare put me in my Place,
What was once, but Now is Gone,
You'll always be My light that really Shone.

Hold On to This,
And don't Let it go,
It's all I have to give,
And all you have to show.
Keeping me from Coming Home,
Maybe be the right thing,
But it feels so Wrong.

Why can't I hold on ?

My heart's Broken,
Halved in Two,
One part for Me and One for You.

Still I see your familliar face,
And your big, blue eyes Keep me in this Space,
Why can't I leave this Place ?
You'll always be my light that really shone,

Hold On to This,
And don't Let it go,
It's all I have to give,
And all you have to show.
Keeping me from Coming Home,
Maybe be the right thing,
But it feels so Wrong.

Why can't I hold-

Fighting Back Tears Tonight,
This Razorblade will Put things Right,
Don't worry Baby, I'll be there soon,
And hold you close once again.

Hold On to This,
And don't Let it go,
It's all I have to give,
And all you have to show.
Keeping me from Coming Home,
Maybe be the right thing,
But it feels so Wrong.

Why can't I hold on ?
x2

Comments anyone ?
#2
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Song looks good by the way . delete those extras thread

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