Hmm I like the experimention with chords and the rhythm guitar came in nicely giving the song some grunt. I thought the solo was a bit over the top. I think it couldve been used to amplify the experimentation of chords. Instead of just hitting the chord notes hit something odd and make it sound more experimental.

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As the angel kisses me once again
You scream poison as you glare
Your bow and arrow by your side
As if you cared

It's a mour......astral congregation
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intro.. I kinda liked it. had some pretty moments, but for my taste it was a little to out of place at times.. but then again im not a big fan of "experimental-out-of-tune-stuff", im a sucker for pretty catchy melodies hehe

Solo thing.. sounds cool.. there you had some nice lines (but also a few I would have liked to be different. mostly the "fast" licks heh)..

Overall it was okay .. good job.

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The intro was beautiful! Wow! Nothing much to say about it except maybe bar 10 sounded a bit odd...
I liked the mini solo, altough it sounded odd too, maybe because it's experimental stuff... but yea anyways it was good.
I didn't like how it finished though -_- was too rude maybe.

Anyways, it was a nice song but you should make it longer, it's a bit short!
7.5/10 (not an experimental-stuff fan) Good job!
Quote by ExplorerFreak
It's the same shape chords! Look at other symphonic stuff and see how they do it.

I'm not quite sure I understand what you mean? Are you talking about the repeated pattern that I use with the piano?