#1
Never in love

Facing each other
With tears in your eyes
The past few years
Have all been lies

Through the down and dirty
You were always there
But inside my heart I find
I no longer care

(Chorus)
Looking back you deny the bad
And I miss the life we never had
A lie told often doesn’t make it true
I…was never in love with you

You blame me for
The chains on you
All the pain I caused
You wanted me too

Where on this earth
Does the love return?
After the truth
And the bridges are burned

(Chorus)

Hold me
Tell me
All is fine
Maybe
Just maybe
It will be in time

F.C. September 20, 2007
#2
Pretty good, the rhyming wasn't as corny as I expected it could have been. Good song. Seemed like it came from the heart, probably happened to you... if not, you did a good job pulling it of. If so... you did a good job explaining it. 9.75/10
#3
Quote by IamOmega
Never in love

Facing each other
With tears in your eyes
The past few years
Have all been lies

Through the down and dirty
You were always there
But inside my heart I find
I no longer care

good first 2 verses. they give a clear image and give a good idea of the setting

(Chorus)
Looking back you deny the bad
And I miss the life we never had
A lie told often doesn’t make it true
I…was never in love with you

great chorus. at least the last 3 lines... I think the first line should be about you - not the other person. just a suggestion though

You blame me for
The chains on you
All the pain I caused
You wanted me too

Where on this earth
Does the love return?
After the truth
And the bridges are burned

I like it

(Chorus)

Hold me
Tell me
All is fine
Maybe
Just maybe
It will be in time

it seems powerful, yet i dont understand it. the whole song is about some straight bitch and you leaving it (sorry i just exagerated a little), and now you are asking that ho for advise and what to do. maybe you are talking to somebody else. god maybe? i think you should make that part clear.

F.C. September 20, 2007



I hope that helped
If you could crit mine i would like you a lot
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=675119