#1
this is the first poem I've written sense my relapse.
I didn't really use much technique or anything but, I feel it is my truest piece yet (It's not about anyone dying, either, if it may seem like it)

I shake my head
We're all ****ed
We're all damned
This world is so cruel
I don't see how you deal
I barely manage to hang on
But I felt those words and I hear you've gone
At least you don't have to suffer
Because I can't cope
You don't have to witness it in its entirety anymore
You just packed your bags and left this world


I didn't write this with "emo" in mind, but it is emotional
I know the rhyming is off, but the way I feel it; it rhymes to me.

critique away
And we will weave in and out of sanity unnoticed
Swirling in blissfully restless visions of all our bleary progress
Glowing in radiant madness
#3
Quote by ninja monkey
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reported?
And we will weave in and out of sanity unnoticed
Swirling in blissfully restless visions of all our bleary progress
Glowing in radiant madness
#4
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#5
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what do i have to do?
And we will weave in and out of sanity unnoticed
Swirling in blissfully restless visions of all our bleary progress
Glowing in radiant madness