#1
for the last month i have been doing a webcomic. i just concluded a three part storyline with an ending so awesome, i'm not legally allowed to post it on UG


EDIT: one quick note, robert is my imaginary friend....telling you that so the other strips will make sense


PART 1:


i'll post the other two in a bit
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
Last edited by hydriplex at Sep 24, 2007,
#4
the art is cool, but i didnt think it was that funny...

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Nice work. That's pretty sweet artwork.
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#6
It's alright, the animation's definitely amazing, the jokes are... Eh.

Keep it up though, and try not to try so hard, if that makes sense.
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#7
i like
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PART 2:

all three were a week apart, but i think the art got significantly better



one note i forgot, robert is an imaginary friend
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
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^ That's kind of important...
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^ That's kind of important...


just a tad, i'll go back and edit my original post to include it
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#11
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for the last month i have been doing a webcomic. i just concluded a three part storyline with an ending so awesome, i'm not legally allowed to post it on UG


EDIT: one quick note, robert is my imaginary friend....telling you that so the other strips will make sense


PART 1:


i'll post the other two in a bit


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#12
PART 3:
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#13
thanks for all the input guys, these were just the last three i did, i have others on the site...link in sig, go there and leave comments

the new one will up on Sunday, i'll post it here when it gets done

"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#14
haha i liked it.
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#15
new strip is done, i am just a bit late

here's a preview of the new strip



click here to see the whole damn thing
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#17
What font do you use inside the speech bubbles in your comic?
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What font do you use inside the speech bubbles in your comic?


it's one from blambot called webletterer, tis free
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
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it's one from blambot called webletterer, tis free


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#20
The art is great, but you're missing a bit of theory. I mean, these webcomics work better as individual jokes which connect a running story. Your jokes are scattered throughout the page. It needs to be that each page is shorter and builds up to one punchline whilst still advancing the story.

Arts great though, keep it up.
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The art is great, but you're missing a bit of theory. I mean, these webcomics work better as individual jokes which connect a running story. Your jokes are scattered throughout the page. It needs to be that each page is shorter and builds up to one punchline whilst still advancing the story.

Arts great though, keep it up.


the "wait, this ain't tokyo" story was just a little side arc i took to make the art a bit better, i think it worked for the most part if you look at part 1 and compare it to part 3

the ones before it and the one i did today went back to my normal gag a day kind of strip

i still appreciate the feedback though
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll
#22
i posted a preview earlier, so here's the full comic



i'm getting back to the gag-a-day comics, new one will be done on thursday
"but i don't want to go among mad people," Alice remarked.
"oh, you can't help that," said the Cat. "we're all mad here."
~lewis carroll