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Hey guys, this is really the first full song i've written. Lines with ** are lines that i think need fixing up so any suggestions are welcome. Cheers

I can see her falling
Into this trap of immature love**
As I plead with hope
To bring her back within arms reach

I can see her finding
All the things I had never seen
As she dares me to accept
To bring her back within…

Hold her now, please hold her now from everything
Before the innocence is lost in his eyes*
I don’t love you, but I’d do anything to have you back

As all im left with are memories
I cant help but hate you
For what you stand for, for what you are
Please stay away, I wont let you

Hold her now, please hold her now from everything
Before the innocence is lost in his eyes**
I don’t love you, but I’d do anything to have you back

How dare you poison this purity
Or is it me bringing this down
Uneasy thoughts grow as time goes on

How dare I keep her from you
Or are you in this for touch alone
Cruel intentions leave you no where in the end

But find me in this, find me all alone
find me in him, spinning my own spiral

But if you find yourself in this
Find yourself all alone, you’ll find yourself back with me

Hold her now, please hold her now from everything
Before the innocence is lost in his eyes**
I don’t love you, but I’d do anything to have you back
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