#2
my band has a song with the same name. and its copywrited.
i'll take that 10% now thanks.


...lol
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#3
Quote by danielrobbyshor
my band has a song with the same name. and its copywrited.
i'll take that 10% now thanks.


...lol

Are you trying to be funny or just be a duesche bag?
#7
I like the intro, really sets the emotion. When the drums come in is sounds very bland like there should be more going on with them. Vocals are pretty good, I like the lyrics a lot. It seems like it goes off beat right before the chorus? Overall good song though, not bad at all! Keep rockin!
#14
Quote by highvoltage66
stftu dylan your out of the band

GOOD! because apparently my solo stuff is better anyways!

HA!
Hi, I like pie.




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#15
Quote by FloydPink92
GOOD! because apparently my solo stuff is better anyways!

HA!

because one guy said that? are you serious? that guy is just jealous of our band music
#16
Quote by Ranos
because one guy said that? are you serious? that guy is just jealous of our band music

Pft...yeah i bet...

Hi, I like pie.




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#17
I think the song has potential however there were some drumming issues...the timing was a bit off...the drums should sound bigger...the guitar sounded a bit to raw and could use a bit of help with some clean guitar effects...the voice isnt to bad however its a bit to loud for the mix and could use some compression and probably some reverb.

Like I said though it has potential however the sound needs to be polished up a bit more and the drums need work

You can crit my song here.

Ocean Blue
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=10369019#post10369019
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