#1
I climbed a tree on campus today with my notebook and pen in hand. This is the result, a little folk song.


my clock stopped today
just in time
pulled a blanket of clouds overhead,
laid down and sighed
laid down and sighed

I can't begin to tell you
I can't begin to tell you
What's on my mind

my clock stopped today
right on time
so I walked to our tree
and started to climb

I find myself floating
in a sea of green
where words cannot follow,
but you know what I mean
you know what I mean

I can't begin to tell you
I can't begin to tell you
What's on my mind


--- myspace.com/edgarjamesmusic
#2
Quote by ndakasimba


my clock stopped today
just in time

my clock stopped today
right on time



these lines just seem so clever...
I like it... nice little poem... I don't think it should be one of your amazing songs though... I feel this should just stay as it is...


never mind... I listened to it on your myspace... its good...
Promises meant a lot back then.
Last edited by ninja monkey at Sep 23, 2007,