#1
I climbed a tree on campus today with my notebook and pen in hand. This is the result, a little folk song. Listen here.


my clock stopped today
just in time
pulled a blanket of clouds overhead,
laid down and sighed
laid down and sighed

I can't begin to tell you
I can't begin to tell you
What's on my mind

my clock stopped today
right on time
so I walked to our tree
and started to climb

I find myself floating
in a sea of green
where words cannot follow,
but you know what I mean
you know what I mean

I can't begin to tell you
I can't begin to tell you
What's on my mind
#3
That's some great **** you got going on man. Good to see another folk man around.

First verse is the best .
I am the Infantry.
#4
Nice song...
I felt the song was good but boring, at least until the transition to the chorus, that really improved the song IMO, idk, it was unexpected.
You're a good singer.