#1
Will try to crit 4 crit. 'Side by side with the Gods'


Raise your swords towards the west wind
And begin your quest along
A path of the old ones forged by the Gods

Swords by their sides
And song in their hearts
Storm in their souls
Lights in the dark

We leave, we run
We’ve never even seen the sun
Knock an arrow, shine your blade
We’re riding through the moonshade

Across seas of blood we ride forevermore
Heathen this means war
Coz we walk side by side with the gods
Look up towards the bitter night
Your souls clad within frostbite

A seven headed beast guards the gate
We are warriors of fate
Raise your sword towards the west wind as a sign of war

Across seas of blood we ride forevermore
Heathen this means war
Coz we walk side by side with the gods
Look up towards the bitter night
Your souls clad within frostbite

Frost residing within your mind
Which in the battle you shall find
A beast that will scream in winter sky
All shall fear the battle cry!
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#2
Hahaha. Power metal.

Seriously, though - it's pretty well-written. Make sure your stanzas line up in terms of syllabic length, though.
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#4
Is it that obvious I'm a Dragonforce fan?
Raise your chalice my brother
Raise it high
To catch the fire that falls from the sky
#5
YES it is...almost as obvious as Dragonforce being Maiden fans...

I like this but where is the battle, its kinda short but a good battle would solve that.
#6
To me, this screamed Amon Amarth. But nicely done, for this type of music.
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