#1
Alright I wasn't sure wether to put this here or in the songwriting section, so I'll try please inform if this is not in the right place.

I need some help on song structuring, I play in a metal band and we have around 10 or so songs which are all great however I have recently been hooked on Jim Steinman's style of structuring songs particularly Bat Out of Hell, I want to be able to write a song like that, which has loads of dynamics and tempo changes however everytime I try it just sounds mechanical and doesn't flow that, well can anyone help me out?
#3
So your asking how to include dynamic interest in your song?

Play louder for the more powerful parts and softer for the ballad-like parts. Thats what I would do. Dynamic interest is all up to you.
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