#1
New song, sorry about length, but I hope its good enough that you won't get bored

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#2
i like the synth tone alot. panning was quite nicely done. drums were pretty nifty. i love the way you do your rythems. they all sound fairly porn groovish to me. i like how it builds up, but i think that if you added actual changes in melody and beat it would make the song twice as good. i just got the new drums, cool sound, but change the melody. nice stuff though

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#3
I like it. It reminds me of trashy sci-fi, which is pretty much the highest praise you can get from me. The tones are all very cool, and it creates a really neat atmosphere. Then when the fast drums kick in it sounds like something off of Kid A. Good work.
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#4
Very cool, just like voodoochild15 said it's very sci-fiish.
I'd like to give some constructive criticism, but I just can't see anything wrong with any of your songs.
#5
Quote by MikeDee
Very cool, just like voodoochild15 said it's very sci-fiish.
I'd like to give some constructive criticism, but I just can't see anything wrong with any of your songs.
Thanks, and I can hear plenty that's wrong, I just don't know how to fix it, ya know?
#6
It's cool to see your tunes progressing, I'd like to think my feedback has been a help. :P

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2 Major problems I see with this tune.

The constant high-hats or shakers or w/e.. are not needed, nor do they fit this vibe. I think you would be better of with some drums that stand out on their own, and make the pattern more interesting and energetic instead of layering some hats that sound a bit half assed over the top. Listen to some IDM to get a reference point for what I'm trying to say here.

Second, the tune is waaay over compressed during the drop, it's sounds horrible through my speakers. Not the sounds themselves, the compression, make things fit better, and you'll be able to turn up the volume, compression/limiting should be a last resort.

EDIT: Apparently it wasn't compression, but infact clipping, which is worse. :P

Otherwise, nice intro atmospherics, could use some more lush organic sounds underlaying the synths, good tune, but it could be better.
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#7
Sci Fi movie, police investigation program, space documentary, this song could be in all!
Although I like the overall flow of the song, I didn't quite like the macarena thingies (super fast hi-hats?)
Really enjoyed the bit around 6:30, where it fades out and then it fades back in.
#8
In order to justify the unusual length of this song, you should probably have some kind of major development or progression, rather than just similar-sounding ambient wanderings for 9 minutes. This could be cool as a part of some sort of movie or tv show soundtrack, but doesn't stand alone too well. Try to move through different phases and ideas rather than finding something you like and dragging it out forever. Overall though, the quality is great and all the little sound effects and everything are pretty cool.

Crit me here: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=678312