#1
lol ok so the song title is a temporary working title, no im not that cheesy lol. My friend made it up as a joke. Either way, its a progressive metal tune that im writing. Musically its pretty much entirely done. I am working on the lyrics and they are coming along pretty well. O yea the solo is pretty temporary. its the first take i took on it. Please crit!!!!

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C4C!!!!!

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#2
Well I kept listening to this song waiting for it to become a progressive metal song, but it never did. This is more like a rock/metal hybrid or just straight up metal. Nice playing, this is a pretty intense piece. Very moshable.

Crit me here: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=678312