#1
Sitting alone Thinking in the dark
They'll never know whats me this is heart to heart
Waiting for a signal that I am free
Walk in the door to look and see
If my bullets are there for me
Because Tonight we either live or we die


Sitting in the basement playin Russian roulette
Don’t need money you got your life to bet
Get out the six shot three to three
No need to sweat its you or me


Open up the chamber close my eyes
Gotta make sure it’s a surprise
Put the bullet in and smile
Then i spin the bitch for a while
Here come friends open the door
They all know what they’re in for


Sitting in the basement playin Russian roulette
Don’t need money you got your life to bet
Get out the six shot three to three
No need to sweat its you or me


Well come on pull the trigger
Just grab it with your first finger
Close your eyes wait and see
Got to learn some how life aint a dream
Don’t back out now hand it to me
Just remember if you win you don’t feel a thing


Sitting in the basement playin Russian roulette
Don’t need money you got your life to bet
Get out the six shot three to three
No need to sweat its you or me


No need to sweat its you or me
Just remember
If you win you don't feel a ****ing thing


Sitting in the basement playin Russian roulette
Don’t need money you got your life to bet
Pass me the gun lets just see
Well damn i won the bullets in me

Every hour on the hour..they drew blood
Last edited by insortediaboli at Sep 24, 2007,
#2
I realy like this song, but I'd delve a bit more into the story line some, the first 3 verses started somthing up, then you just let it die, I'd finish it out with someone dieing..preferable, the 'narrorator' of the story. like...have it your turn, and you close your eye's and hear the bang, somthing along those lines, thats just my opinion though.

and if you dont mind critting mine...
it's on this page, "the girl of my dreams (unfinished)"
#3
i like how you ended it, and that chorus is realy catchy too , thanks for the crit.