Made a drum track on fruity loops and decided to write some riffs to it... recording from my Vox with line out straight to computer using Audacity. A good crit is well appreciated and will crit back.

Edit : Song is in my UG profile.
AIM - JanesAdd1cti0n

The Rain And Snow

We've been reduced to ruin in this noncalibrated earth that has stumbled upon us.
Tone of guitar is really good. I really like the part(s) where the rest takes a break and the bass gets to play "solo".
The song kind of loses my interest until the small leadish part (around 2 minutes I think) starts, which sounds nice. I thought the ending was too long.

The rythm (bass and drums) is very catchy throughout the song, and the recording quality is superb. Overall, I enjoyed it

(and thanks for critting mine)