take it to the sub-forum...

read the rules there to find out where to post exactly...
Promises meant a lot back then.
I'm sorry, is this a question?

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this is a great resource to help you write

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thanks. Hope to see you writing

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Park that car
Drop that phone
Sleep on the floor
Dream about me
awww dayumn!
Are you talkin lyrics or music?

Cause in lyrics, I hate making my music make too much sense in an obvious way, or too plain, or too corny. I like giving my songs meanings and somewhat hiding them. I cant explain it. What you gotta do is like, not make your writing too obvious or corny and cliche. Use metaphors or some nice figurative language. Or be stupid. Like instead of writing "I ****in love you and will never let you go" in one of my songs I wrote

When I said she'd keep me forever
I didnt think she'd take me seriously
Now my body's locked up in pieces in her toy box

Dont steal that though. lol
Yeah try to be different
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