#1
I have been in this band for a while but we just came up with the name yesterday which as a result means that we have enough content to create a myspace.

So today I made the myspace and some background art just to make things more attractive.

What I need you to do is to give me some criticism on my art.

It seems off and I can't figure out what it is...

Here is the link to the myspace so you can see it with everything else.



(cookies to anyone who guesses where the name comes from)

EDIT

Yes it is from fight club.
Last edited by superunknown at Sep 26, 2007,
#3
Question: Why do you have a comma after the "this" in your band's name?
Peepee on yo tittays
#4
Quote by misty_b
Question: Why do you have a comma after the "this" in your band's name?


Wellllll if you knew where the quote came from you would know.



Quote by pratt121
doesn't fight club have a scene with a chemical burn?


That was really fast.

Have a cookie.

#6
make the text on your page white, otherwise you can't read it when it's against the artwork.
#8
Quote by superunknown
That was really fast.

Have a cookie.

[giant image of cookie]

What can I say, I loves me some fight club.

thanks for the cookie. not a bad band name either.
#9
Quote by kidsthesedays
why are the letters t-a-m and b special?

seems random.



It is supposed to be kind of random like that.

I wanted to do something that might look pretty cool and would fit the theme of destruction presented by our name.
#10
Quote by schecter_guy
make the text on your page white, otherwise you can't read it when it's against the artwork.


As far as I know the page is designed so that no text overlaps the graphics...