#1
This is a song about the questions that you ask yourself when you're in a relationship. questions about the future, wondering what would have happened if you didn't meet on that first night etc. Also, its about knowing that if you both feel strongly about each other, you'll be able to get through anything.

Or at least that was my intention!

Tell me what you think about it. If you want me to crit yours in return, post a link, or tell me what its called and ill be more than happy to do that. The song is called "On This Road"

Verse 1
Do you wonder where we are heading?
Or where our paths will take us?
Which direction we’ll take
What decisions we’ll make
Will we be together when it’s all said and done?

Do you wonder how it would have been
If we didn’t meet that night?
Had I arrived a moment later,
Or you spoke to your friends a little longer
Would we have ever spoken, or met?

Pre-Chorus
But when I think about all these what ifs,
I know that I could waste so much time
Why dwell on what’s happened when
Our love for each other will keep us in line

Chorus
We are on this road
It’s becoming clearer as it goes
We are on this road
Through the highs and the lows

Verse 2
That first week always makes me think.
I couldn’t call you, or find you at your home.
We think it was one Monday kiss
But Wednesday’s would be bliss
Friday’s made the week complete.

The nights apart are surreal to me.
It feels strange to wake up without you
But when I close my eyes,
Your image shows.
That’s all that I need to be sure of this

Pre-Chorus
But when I think about all these what ifs,
I know that I could waste so much time
Why dwell on what’s happened when
Our love for each other will keep us in line

Chorus
We are on this road
It’s becoming clearer as it goes
We are on this road
Through the highs and the lows

Verse 3
How will we be in 10 years?
Will we have a family, and will the love still be there?
Or will our love be history?
Forever, I can’t guarantee,
But we’ll do all we can to make it through


Cheers

Neil
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Last edited by theneildeal at Sep 28, 2007,
#2
I think this song is pretty good and probably pretty meaningful to you as well. the only thing i would change is i would make the chorus just a little thicker, maybe add some things to it, but it flows nicely. and on the second part of vs one on the first line, i think you might have a type-o. but overall good, and do u think u could check my other song real quick?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=680659
#3
cheers mate. i was thinking about changing the chorus a bit, but i think that what i have will sound good with the music that i wrote. I have just noticed the typo, so thanks for that!

Cheers for the crit mate!
UG's Stock Market Guy

Hablo Español
Wǒ néng shuō Zhōngwén

So you can speak to me in English, Spanish or Chinese

My Recordings:

Dissident Blues
El Farol
Lenny
We'll Make This Work
Stop This Train