#1
Hey all

This is my first post on this board, and I tought I may ask you to comment my song titled Deadly Mistake (one of the first songs I've ever written). It's a somewhat pop-rock song, and though I really hate this style, I felt like I should try myself in it, too.

I'd appriciate any kind of critics.

Thank you so much,

Axes
Attachments:
deadlymistake.zip
#2
im really digging it, only problem with the tab is you have the solo guitar at -16 so you cant hear it.
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#3
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im really digging it, only problem with the tab is you have the solo guitar at -16 so you cant hear it.


Really? It's working fine for me
#6
no gonna lie, pretty bad ass.
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#7
Cheers for the crit

The intro was nice, loved the bass!
Didn't really like the intro solo though, I thought some notes were off key and it wasn't that great.
I just loved bar 65 to 72, it was just awesome, and the riff before it was not bad too!
The solo was really good, I loved the wah-wah! And the whole thing was way better than the intro solo.
The outro was nice too

Overall, good song, needs some arrangements in the intro solo 8/10 Good job!