#1
I posted this last night in the wrong forum.

So here it is in the right one.

I can't actually play any of this, some because I just haven't learned it yet, some because I"m not that good. My skill as a composer are far greater than my skill as a guitarist.
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Last edited by Wonthefu at Sep 28, 2007,
#2
I tried playing the MIDI but nothing came out. Do you have the GP5 file?

And thanks for the crit on mine btw, I get that (sounds like SOAD) comment quite a bit apparently lol.
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#4
Pretty ridiculous, sounds dragonfarceish
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#5
Hmmm, not sure how to describe this. Maybe a not-so-crazy Behold...The Arctopus? I like it either way.
#6
The song would be absurdly hard to play ... wow. It's very cool actually, the riffs are well done and the straight 8th notes hold the continuity well.

The solos are weird, but flow with the context of the music quite well.

I would love to see this performed live actually.
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Swept under the seams
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where we sleep, insomniac dreams
#7
Quote by revan1013
The song would be absurdly hard to play ... wow. It's very cool actually, the riffs are well done and the straight 8th notes hold the continuity well.

The solos are weird, but flow with the context of the music quite well.

I would love to see this performed live actually.



Thanks, now I just have to learn it!
#8
Hm.

It was good, but not great in my opinion. I think that the first riff was pretty good. It didn't flow the best but it was good none-the-less.

Riff C totally killed the flow and momentum of the song imo. I didn't especially like it. =\

Solo was pretty good, a bit unpredictable at times (which can be a good thing).

With a bit of tweaking this could be a sweet song.

7/10

Plz crit one of mine in sig?