Most recent song, link is in my sig, C4C. Be nice.
The guitar is great, and the vocals work really well. Your voice sounds sort of like a popular artist, but I don't remember his name. The only thing I didn't like was the ending. It just felt sort of forced. Maybe you could put a couple more chord changes right before or something, but it's not a big deal.
Great, catchy, simple song. The guitar has a percussive thing going on with it making the song sound fuller. The vocals are great and fit the song well they don't annoy the hell out of me like most UG recordings. The only real problem was the recording; there was some kind of popping through-out.
Yeah my mic is screwed. I'll gladly crit yours.