#1
I came up with the rhythm part when I broke one of my strings on my guitar.



I just went from there and made this peice in 3-4 days.

Comments and Critiques appreciated.
Attachments:
Longing.zip
[img]http://i.imgur.com/LYZyCdp.gif[/img]


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#2
Hmm...Interesting.

10 for originality, but I really didn't like the key/scale to be honest. Kinda annoying.

But not bad. The electric guitar during the verse was rather annoying. The chorus wasn't too bad....

Not my favorite, but still not bad.

7/10

Plz crit one of mine in sig?
#3
Yeah, the verse sounds much better when you mute that part.
[img]http://i.imgur.com/LYZyCdp.gif[/img]


Quote by CrossBack7
Momie's like not even a real person, just an asian, lesbian spirit.