The song was a pretty fun sounding bouncing song, but it could be done better. The guitar tone was the horrid clean-electric-nothing that I hear so often on the sites and it was out of tune just enough to be annoying. The vocals were meh, but I can't comment on them much because I don't think I can sing much either. Also I don't know what happened with your recording software that made the song panned all the way to the left on both tracks, but what ever it is please fix it.

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Last edited by wholovesthesun at Sep 29, 2007,
Thanks for the crits. It isn't panned to the left when I play it, but I have weird audio problems all the time, so I'm sorry about that. If I ever put more time into it, I'll probably distort and chorus the guitar, strip it down, and put synth on top, with fills and probably a synth line over the chorus. Drum and bass too of course. Like of Montreal or something, but less weird.