#1
Lots of cool glitching on the drums midway, but the mixing and the sampled vocals.... not so great, whatever, still a quality tune. Its on my profile, so just click my name.


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#2
Pretty cool piece. I like the ambiance you maintain throughout the track, but the drums could be a little bassier, and not so trebbly. Aside from the percussion, the rest of the instrumentalism seems exactly as it should. I like the sparse vocal sampling you've got there, though, to be honest, I wish it was louder so I could hear what they were saying. =D

I like the chime instrument you used. The whirling atmosphere half way through was nice as well.

Overall, solid track, if not a little too unmemorable. Would be effective as an accompaniment to something, though.

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#3
Great track there, it really seemed like it could be made into a great hip-hop epic if you added the nesessary vocals and EQed the drums like yawn said. I love the changes throughout and how everything had smooth tranistions in and out. The voices were very interesting and a good addition to parts where it almost lost my attention. Good song overall although vocals would make it perfect.
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#4
Crit as I listen:
Cool intro, I like the effects. It really feels like something is right around the corner
Those voices were really cool!
I like the part at 2.15
I like the mood in this song. Really chilled.
I agree with yawn, it's great, but a little too unmemorable.
But this is something I would like to listen to when I chill out.
Great job!

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#5
I love how the voices just sort of walk in. I agree with whoever said the drums should be bassier. They're pretty good now, but a little more bass would make this feel more full. This is fun to listen to and definitely great chill music.
#7
Quote by schecter_chris
thats pretty aweosme dude, did you use fruity loops? teh bass drum on some of the other songs sounds alot lik the ones of fruity loops

Nope, I use Logic Express 7(.2???)

The kick drum was sampled frommmm...... I think it was a skullsnaps break, that's my usual kick.
#9
Quote by mooshoepork
listening as I type-

Like the cool effects at the start, and the ambient background noise.
Drums sound pretty good also. It gets really good when the voice comes in. Where is it from? I like it man, the bass is cool also . Maybe add a bit of bass to the drums.

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I dunno where it came from, I just had the sample lying around in my vocals folder, and I needed some vocally stuff.