#1
well an e-mail actually

i'm writng to mm music asking them if they have any part-time work.
ive started it:
Dear MM music
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love and kisses
Tom

give me lines that will help!
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#3
hahaha
lol
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#4
I would be interested in joining your store for part time work. I enjoy playing the guitar and ill be a very helpful member. I am easy to get along with, i like team work.

Thats all i can think of but just talk out your passion for guitars and say that your good when working as a team because your gunna be working with other staff. Oh and say your a friendly guy
#5
ok this is what i've done

Dear MM Music
I was wandering if you had any part-time work available?
I enjoy playing the guitar, bass and ukulele and will be a very helpful member. I am easy to get along with, and i have a good work ethic.
I use BKP's and thus i have taste in pickups, and despite my emo haircut, I DO NOT like MCR or Fall Out Boy.
Love and Kisses
Tom
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dude sonic music??? you're my hero!

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Love you


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#6
Hmm maybe say what kind of music you like and not say who you like, it might put them off >_> all tho i agree with wat you say
#9
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ok this is what i've done

Dear MM Music
I was wandering if you had any part-time work available?
I enjoy playing the guitar, bass and ukulele and will be a very helpful member. I am easy to get along with, and i have a good work ethic.

Tom


That will be good.
Seriously, don't write Love and Kisses if you're applying for a job, thats quite moronic.
(No offense)
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#11
fine i'll cut out love and kisses...
and magic jim i want a job selling guitars not as a rent boy...

i changed it to 'yours sincerely
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#14
Just attach yer CV and use the e-mail to give a brief introduction of who you are and why you're applying for the job.
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#15
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ok this is what i've done

Dear MM Music
I was wandering if you had any part-time work available?
I enjoy playing the guitar, bass and ukulele and will be a very helpful member. I am easy to get along with, and i have a good work ethic.
I use BKP's and thus i have taste in pickups, and despite my emo haircut, I DO NOT like MCR or Fall Out Boy.
Love and Kisses
Tom

I'll be honest, that's terrible.

First of all: Wondering. And you don't need to put a question mark at the end of that sentence. This letter makes you sound like an annoying pubescent teeny.
#16
promise naughty favours , works for me
You are not your job.
You're not how much money you have in the bank.
You're not the car you drive.
You're not the contents of your wallet.
You're not your fucking khakis.
You're the all-singing, all-dancing crap of the world.
#17
Also, the shop owners are not likely to share the same views as you about music. Don't express your tastes and opinions in an application letter.

"I DUNT LIEK FALL OUT BOY!LOL" is not the way to go here. Even if they agree, they do not want to read this in an application letter. It's informal, it's closed-minded and it doesn't make you look employable. Remember, they're a music shop, thus catering to each and every musical demographic.

If you're ever going to share your opinions on an application letter, make sure they're neutral.
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"The end is extremely fucking nigh..."
#18
Don't even write a letter. Call them and ask if they are hiring. If they say yes, go in and drop of a resume. That's all you need to do.
#20
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You give me a job, i give you a hand job.

Tom.


works every time


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#22
Jesus christ x) Love and Kisses LMAO
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