#1
Well i found another song in my collection of stuff i did over the past year. i cant believe i forgot about it. It has some cool riffs i think and the drums are kinda eh but i thought i was an alright song. =P
Attachments:
fgbfg.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
#2
You can feel the rhythm in this, apart from in bar 13, it's as if you're going a steady pace then you hit a rock/wall/big object, etc.

Still listening and coincidentally my guitar is in Drop C.
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Want to build a Jackson, to be fairly freaking honest.

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#3
So other than that part it was alright?
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
#4
Yeah, it was good.

But I would say to improve on it. It could be better, but it is good.
---------------
VOX AD30VT
BOSS GT8

Want to build a Jackson, to be fairly freaking honest.

Quote by Kanthras
Put some crap in the hole, like something sticky. And liquid-ish.
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#5
I'd say it's kind of boring and to predictable. I think it needs more rhythm changes and a lot more variation on the riffing. I kept playing back the next bits in my head without having heard them to begin with.

Any chance you could crit the arrangement of Toccata and Fugue? Be as harsh as you want. I plan on improving it.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=681532
"A guitar is just like a hard teddy, isn't it?" - DAAAAAAAN BAKER
#6
bump =/?

also updated it for a better solo, fills, and unfinished bass.
Attachments:
Updated.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
Last edited by kylendm at Oct 1, 2007,
#7
Well here's probably the last update I'm going to do so here goes. Please crit guys.
Attachments:
Metalcore Attempt.zip
Guitars:
Ibanez UV777P
Ibanez RGD2127FX
Ibanez RG3120TW
Ibanez RGD7321
Ibanez RG6003FM
Ibanez SA160
Jackson Slatxmg3-7
Amps:
Baron Custom Amps K88
Rivera Knucklehead TRE
Fryette Sig: X
Randall RM4 /w Modded modules
Cabs:
Mesa 4x12
Bogner 4x12
Peavey 4x12(K85s)
#8
It was to slow for my liking, not tempo wise, but I'm getting into a lot more heavier, faster stuff. Still not bad for an attempt though.
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